Hello everyone,

Ok so I am going to be REALLY lame I see keeping up this site. Its hard for me to juggle everything and so yeah. I am thinking along the lines of this....I started to create my story so I will just tell you my rough outline:

It will be the story of a girl...maybe a boy but I think girl will be better for the outline. Her family is only her father and older brother so when they are taken to the prison camp she is seperated from them. While she is in the camp she gets a chance to be a nurse to some of the German children, giving her a chance to help a young Jewish boy and Jewish girl....like I said its rough
later
Mo

SORRINESS!

I am really sorry that I am not keeping up on this blog. I am kinda having a busy month and its hard to sit down and write a quality story so if you guys want to see anything tell me so it might help push me along a little bit-ish! I have to write a story at school about the holocaust so I might start to develop that and then post it from time to time. I think I will have to put my current story on hold so sorry about that but I will start to try and work on the haulocaust one.
Love you all
Monique

Ok..sorry its been so long!

Hi its really hard to write this story..Im really busy. But just keep checking. I am thinking that I am going to go with
1.) The story could be about the family as a whole and go back and forth between all of their perspectives and things that are goin on in their minds and what happens with them, especially if we make it during a war period and send the dad off to war and maybe one of the sisters into a nursing position. (this would have to be in some place in Europe, that got hit bad during some war, either world war I or II)

I know most of you liked the third one the most but I think that the first one will work ourt really good. Let me give you an example of what it will kinda look like.

First Chapter> Mr. D(John) looked down at his son(Micheal) in amazment. I did not know you could make such a mess, he mumbled to himself, Now Norah is going to have me clean it up because I was supposed to watch him!
Where did John and Micheal go? I went to the grocery store for 20 min. and they dissapear, figures. What is this here? Oh I see Micheal has gotten into the paper and scissors again. Oh well, I guess I will have to clean it up now.

Ok I know that was a lame example but I made it up on the spot. So it would kind of go like that. It would totally indicate it was whichever part of the family and what they are thinking. So I think I will go with that one...I am going to work on it later and I will hopefully have a story starter posted by tonight

Love Mooks

Progression

Hello,
Im sorry guys if I do not update this one so much. I am really busy lately but I guess that I can write down my few thoughts for my direction of the story:

1.) The story could be about the fmaily as a whole and go back and forth between all of their perspectives and things that are goin on in their minds and what happens with them, especially if we make it during a war period and send the dad off to war and maybe one of the sisters into a nursing position. (this would have to be in some place in Europe, that got hit bad during some war, either world war I or II)

2.) I could just go along with the Teenage girl maybe in the late fiftys and she could live in USA and just about her life (this subject might be a Little hard to grow off of)

3.) I could do that family idea but they live in Africa during the time that they are taking slaves to America, so going WAAAY back. So maybe the fmaily gets split up like all but one of them get taken to America and then once in America the family gets seperated even more.

Well what do you guys think of these ideas?? I kinda just thought of them right now so..if they are not that good tell me!
Love
Monique

Starts

Hey guys, This is a new thing for me but this is how I begin to devolp most of my stories. I will welcome ANY comments on things to add or take away or something about my characters. I am open to input and that is why I am writing this on this blog so you all can help me out. like should it be in america africa denmark or france? I think America it would be a tad bit more boring and would take some time to rustle up anything absolutly interesting! ok so here it goes:


Beginning of story about teen girl in America (Or Africa, or France, or Denmark)

Family-
Dad (status, alive)
Mother (status alive)
Sister (Status-alive-22-with family)
Sister (status-dead-14)
Brother (status-alive-suffering from a bone disease-11)
Brother (status-alive-4)

Friends-
Best Friend (status-alive-17*same age)
Other friends*4*(status-all alive- ages*16, 16, 16, 17)
Acquaintances*about 12 to 13 all around the ages of 15 and 16 and 17*boys and girls

Other Family members-
Grandmother (status-lives with the family-alive-about 86)
Uncle George and Aunt Hannah (status-live far away-alive-in mid forties)

Love yA
Monique

Welcome to My site

I have just started this Blog but on here will be my stories that I will begin to write on here. I think that my first story will be about a teenage girl in America in the 1950's or something. Well tell me what you think!
Love Monique