Starts
Hey guys, This is a new thing for me but this is how I begin to devolp most of my stories. I will welcome ANY comments on things to add or take away or something about my characters. I am open to input and that is why I am writing this on this blog so you all can help me out. like should it be in america africa denmark or france? I think America it would be a tad bit more boring and would take some time to rustle up anything absolutly interesting! ok so here it goes:
Beginning of story about teen girl in America (Or Africa, or France, or Denmark)
Family-
Dad (status, alive)
Mother (status alive)
Sister (Status-alive-22-with family)
Sister (status-dead-14)
Brother (status-alive-suffering from a bone disease-11)
Brother (status-alive-4)
Friends-
Best Friend (status-alive-17*same age)
Other friends*4*(status-all alive- ages*16, 16, 16, 17)
Acquaintances*about 12 to 13 all around the ages of 15 and 16 and 17*boys and girls
Other Family members-
Grandmother (status-lives with the family-alive-about 86)
Uncle George and Aunt Hannah (status-live far away-alive-in mid forties)
Love yA
Monique
Beginning of story about teen girl in America (Or Africa, or France, or Denmark)
Family-
Dad (status, alive)
Mother (status alive)
Sister (Status-alive-22-with family)
Sister (status-dead-14)
Brother (status-alive-suffering from a bone disease-11)
Brother (status-alive-4)
Friends-
Best Friend (status-alive-17*same age)
Other friends*4*(status-all alive- ages*16, 16, 16, 17)
Acquaintances*about 12 to 13 all around the ages of 15 and 16 and 17*boys and girls
Other Family members-
Grandmother (status-lives with the family-alive-about 86)
Uncle George and Aunt Hannah (status-live far away-alive-in mid forties)
Love yA
Monique
posted by Monique at 1:05 PM
2 Comments:
this is wierd... what am i supposed to say? come up with new ideas?
should I take out the youngest brother?? I just thought that he would bring in the family a little bit more becasue he was younger and maybe as the family goes through troubles the older one can comfort the younger one and I thought that the brother with the sickness would bring in a little big of trouble and then the older sister is not a part of the family because she has her own family now so its really only 3 kids because ones already dead before the story starts.....
Mooks
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