Ok..sorry its been so long!
Hi its really hard to write this story..Im really busy. But just keep checking. I am thinking that I am going to go with
1.) The story could be about the family as a whole and go back and forth between all of their perspectives and things that are goin on in their minds and what happens with them, especially if we make it during a war period and send the dad off to war and maybe one of the sisters into a nursing position. (this would have to be in some place in Europe, that got hit bad during some war, either world war I or II)
I know most of you liked the third one the most but I think that the first one will work ourt really good. Let me give you an example of what it will kinda look like.
First Chapter> Mr. D(John) looked down at his son(Micheal) in amazment. I did not know you could make such a mess, he mumbled to himself, Now Norah is going to have me clean it up because I was supposed to watch him!
Where did John and Micheal go? I went to the grocery store for 20 min. and they dissapear, figures. What is this here? Oh I see Micheal has gotten into the paper and scissors again. Oh well, I guess I will have to clean it up now.
Ok I know that was a lame example but I made it up on the spot. So it would kind of go like that. It would totally indicate it was whichever part of the family and what they are thinking. So I think I will go with that one...I am going to work on it later and I will hopefully have a story starter posted by tonight
Love Mooks
1.) The story could be about the family as a whole and go back and forth between all of their perspectives and things that are goin on in their minds and what happens with them, especially if we make it during a war period and send the dad off to war and maybe one of the sisters into a nursing position. (this would have to be in some place in Europe, that got hit bad during some war, either world war I or II)
I know most of you liked the third one the most but I think that the first one will work ourt really good. Let me give you an example of what it will kinda look like.
First Chapter> Mr. D(John) looked down at his son(Micheal) in amazment. I did not know you could make such a mess, he mumbled to himself, Now Norah is going to have me clean it up because I was supposed to watch him!
Where did John and Micheal go? I went to the grocery store for 20 min. and they dissapear, figures. What is this here? Oh I see Micheal has gotten into the paper and scissors again. Oh well, I guess I will have to clean it up now.
Ok I know that was a lame example but I made it up on the spot. So it would kind of go like that. It would totally indicate it was whichever part of the family and what they are thinking. So I think I will go with that one...I am going to work on it later and I will hopefully have a story starter posted by tonight
Love Mooks
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